A story in the grandest .. A story in the summit magnificence .. Followers and forward ..
Translated you Chapter IV .. I wish Torgomti be valid ..

Chapter IV: strange events ..?
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What Alex entered the room, and found
Soldiers and Reka and Michael ahead
Alex: Oh soldiers thrown off ..
One soldiers: But .. - -
Alex confidently and redundant power: not your right to object to any soldier ordered .. A thrown off, but ..
Then soldiers came away outside room
Alex and closed the door behind
They want to talk but Alex preceded Reka
Reka anger and unity: Chbhec was my friend invited me to what this is not only the screaming .. I did not intend to underestimate Fairsnk and Shan King ..!
Michael seemed to surprise and astonishment of what she said just Reka
But Alex exploded Laughing
Reka angrily: I do not think that what I said is laughter ..
Alex: Reka Hdei of Roek only ..!
Shocked Reka inter Alex recent stood just
They said when: You .. You .. you know the names?!
Alex is still impacts on its laughs: What is it I am Alex .. Alexandra .. Did Taerveny Reka ..?
Reka: Uh .. Really ..! This you .. Alex
Hit and Aangtha
Reka and the glint of tears in her eyes: Alex, I did not know it Ante .. Unfortunately really ..
Alex: My Hha Reka not Tktervi any guilt for Taatasefi ..
Reka: We have eased significantly .. Atkddt you and another girl ..
Alex: good Reka .. Everything will be fine ..
Mike Katahma: a. Alex where my mother and father, Brad ..?
The damage here is Alex, said: apologize to Michael but I did Aarham today ..
Reka: So where are you ..?
Alex: Surroi also for all what happened to me ..
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Told them everything that happened to me since I went to my room and reading of the novel yesterday
- Not told them about imaginary white of the paper do not believe it is negligible -
That arrived here after my hot with Simon
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Mike: This story is strange indeed ..!
Reka: it is what I have heard along the strangest of my life ..!
Alex: This is what happened to me .. What happened to how, as Saltma here ..?
Mike: I was in the house of my uncle only Taatzkrin ..?
Alex: How a true .. I forgot that! But how arrived here ..?
Mike: woke up yesterday to voice calling blindness was too late ... Dawn has been the emergence boat .. The tone of his voice was in great fear of him not Alhzaa days .. The scream is calling and calling his sons .. I was afraid .. No shouting that the days of Ioukzna Thus blindness in the middle of the night, it decided not to go .. Everyone stayed Katja Matthew, and even how .. He will remain with me is that it wants to see what his father, and no problem of the post in the room and he would return alone, but ..
(Michael timely silence and did not complete the story)
Alex: Mike What happened after that Turkk Kevin alone ..?
Mike: I really do not know ..
Reka: Why ..?!
Mike: When he went, I waited half an hour alone, but he did not prepare, so that no one was home time.!
Alex: Mamaaaaaa ..?
Mike: for them discussed everywhere .. They had disappeared ..!
(His last word and insisted strongly shaped by fear)
Alex: Do not know how it happened ..?
Mike: No .. But the car had also disappeared ..
Alex: car ..?!
Mike: Yes emerged from the house .. When the sun emerged .. I thought I Sagdam .. But I Tfajat .. No one others ..! Went (of the garage) but I did not find anyone there, so the car had disappeared .. They left the show in the middle of the night .. When Best blindness .. Well .. Then roads started to walk alone and then emerged a group of the Knights Giadhm me .. Eased to escape quickly .. But I could not have been holding me and Rmoni Hta to find a group of people others have also been arrested ..
Alex: Uh, Mike .. Is Adhuk ..?
Mike: Certainly not .. They could not hurt ..
Alex: Thank God ..
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Michael story where some ambiguity ..
Impossible to be blindness in the situation described by Michael
Fmi strong man and has been working in the army before retiring ..
And Ammm Mike said that his car also disappeared ..!
We have to know the secret .. Not all cars disappeared? Ahnak what happened ..?
Where disappeared, and his family blindness ..?
Do they go in the middle of the night also believes Michael ..?
These questions need answers ..?!
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Alex: What Reka how you arrived here ...?
Reka: Well .. Everything was normal last night has been anything strange at all
In the morning he woke up when I did not find any of my family members did not find any one of them ..
I said that perhaps my brothers went to school and my father went shopping .. Well Ante you usually my mother loves shopping early in the morning to enable them to buy what they want without congestion .. I did not imagine that something strange will happen .. Aaftari dealt with calmly and then went out of the house .. And on my way to your house objected Highway Varsan abated significantly .. Imitttiyan horses were great and hold real swords Bdim a abated and fled .. But I have not succeeded and grabbed me and knights Kadani here ..
Then Michael found and those in many other room ..
Alex: United this strange .. Did not see any member of your family then ..?
Reka concern: No I did not consider any of them .. They also have disappeared from the planet ..!
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Torgomti wait for the rest of the chapters .. God ..

قصتك روعه بس النهاي ما عجبتني
والسبب هوي انك كنت اتحوطي احداث غير متوقعه
بس النهاي متوقعه
يسلمو ايديكي حبيت القصه اكتير واعرفي اني مش عمبجاملك
لاني بعترف وينتى بتكون القصه مو حلوي

الرواية كـــوول و صـــاحبتهــا روعهـــ و أروعهــــا التنســيق و الترتيب .. !!

مشكــــورة و ماقصرتي قلبـــووو .. !!

ثآنكس
 

ميرسي يالغلا

مررره كوووول وكيووووت

ماشاء الله عليك

تهبللللل

أشكرك وأتمنى التقدم أكثر

وننتظر مواضيعك الروعه

أختك

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ...
رووووووووووووووووووعه اول موضوع اقراها بالمنتدى وشجعني بصراحه لقراءة الباقي ...
اشكرك خيتو ...
ننتظر ابداعاتك ..
محبتك

ماشاء الله ....

رائع ما كتب قلمج ...

مبدعه بمعنى الكلمه....

بـــسم الله الرحمن الرحيم

،،،،،،،،،،،

أنتي قلتي :

عشان أنا أتحسن بمستواي اوكي ..؟

بس مـــــا شـــاّء الله مستواج وااااايد حلو و اللي عرفته بمستوااج

القصه " what happen to the word "

القصه واااااايد " كـــيوت ، كووووول و تينن " ..

و انشاء الله انج تحافظيـــــن علـــى هالمستوى

، ، ، ، ، ، ، ،

ثانكس عجبتني الرواية:cool:

ننتضر مواضيعك الجديده:yes:

اقتباس:

ماشاء الله .... رائع ما كتب قلمج ... مبدعه بمعنى الكلمه....

مرورج ـ هو الرآئع يآ بنـــت بلادي ...^\\\^
نورتــي موضوعي بطلتـــج الحلوهـ وردجـ العســل
أحرجتــي توآضيعي يالغلا ...

لا عدمــنآ هالطلهـ الح ــلوهـ ~

:cool2: ~ وآيتــي

يَـآآآآآي !

شو هـآذَآ الإبـدَآآع !!

والله القِصة رآآئِعة جـداً ومميـزَة
وأحـدَآث البــِدآية حِيـل أعجبتنِي ..
فكرتينِي بفيلْم آلرعب The Ring لُـوولـ ^^" ..

مُحتَـوى القِصة صَرآآحَـة أدهَشنِـي ..!
وطريقـةَ رِوآية آلقصِة إبدَآآآع ..!

والنهَـآية كَـآنتْ شُويتِيـن صَدمـة !
لأنهَـآ [ كرييـتف ] ومُبتكَـرة !

تقييم لكِ يآ مُبدعَة ..

أختك الدبـوشِيـة ..
العَجـوز المُخرفَـة ..
فآنيـلآ سكَـآآي ،،

شكراً
 

Yaaaay
 

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