The first poem in this site

[falas6in]

Hi Girls,

I just write those words yesterday.....I like them so much please share me your opinion
I wish to be what I want.... I wish to go to every site....
I wish to sing aloud although....
yours voice is singing every night....
No one,No one,No one will pay....
lovers and friends don't stay....
they just don't go....
stuck in your way....
So,what they will do it's the love game....

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I wish to dance like butterfly....
but my HEART is inmate in your cage....
I wish to talk without a little lie....
O! I know it's hard to start a new page....
let's play the broken HEART game....
we know it well..
but this time without changing the name ....
O! I know it's like playing in the hell....
So,what we will do its the love game....


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I miss you dearly in my dream....
although you play with the love demon....
I miss you singing in the lover's team....
I miss me dance with every one....
a little rose in the spring....
my HEART was a beautiful thing ....
like a little child....
but your HEART was a wild....
So,what you will do it's the love game...

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I miss you rocking in my HEART....
singing in it...
like it's...
from your soul's part....
I miss your love that make me vigil to another day....
I miss me say words now I don't say....
So,what I will do it's the love game....

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I will not cry again....
I will write the songs in my brain....
I will forget all the pain...
I will sink deeply in the world's insane...
our life like a speedy train....
we should follow ....
let's shack it....
sing it ....
and dance all the night...
breath it....
love it....
and let the suffer go away!!!....

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I will not rocking in the night....
I will rock on every site...
I will not run away...
may be it's hard to display...
but I will let them pay....
in the love game....
they will not pay the broken HEART price....
it's now growing slowly in the song paradise...
this chance will not be twice...
so I will have it and have fun...
SINGING in the sun....
every sadness will done...
So,what all of us will do it's the love game...

[غلا السلع]

I will not cry again....
I will write the songs in my brain....
I will forget all the pain...

Thank you for this beautiful poem
And the wonderful words

[ڹـآﮂيـّۃ؛]

JusT great to ba a girl
writing a songs

making it from her heart
and simply write it on the paper


just nice subject u wrote


be always like this

[falas6in]

thank you girls for this awesome comments

[دفء الشتاء]

I felt the pain between your words and after each line
but they remain beautifull and HOPEFULL as a flying bird

You do have some talents ;] .. .. Keep It Up
And u'll always be welcomed here

D=

[بنت العز .... كلمتها تهز]

thank you girls for this awesome comments

[falas6in]

Thank you so mush
your words add a great confidence to me
and I will try to do my best in the next poem