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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my series of poems


meshooz
19-06-2008, 03:03 AM
hello girls, am a poem writer and i will write poems consistantly...here goes the first one
its called sunshine

i see you walk by, every night, but never thought you would look behind
look behind and see my eyes, following your every step and smile
but one day , you passed by, asked me how are you,and i smiled
we talked for hours about things, but the next week, u didnt come by or swing
i was worried about you, where were you?
next day, i ask about you, they tell me you died because you were ill,
i cry till my eyes cant see
i wrote a poem to you, and put it in your grave, it says you my sunshine, and ill do what it takes, to see you pass by every day......
i hope u liked it, thank you

muslimaaaa
19-06-2008, 01:59 PM
:0403: thank you for sharing your poem with us , your poem is excellent mashaa Allah but if you will write in things in our religion it would be better i will wait your poems isA :give_rose:

رفيعة المقام
19-06-2008, 02:26 PM
ما شاء الله عليج قصيدتج واااايد حلوه

بس لو انج تكتبين بالعربي يكون احسن لان اللغه العربي مافي احلا عنها

على العموم نحن بانتظار المزيد من الابداع !
ودمتي سالمه لمن تحبين

meshooz
22-06-2008, 05:57 PM
thanks to all

ملسونه
23-06-2008, 03:24 PM
نااااااااااااااايس
^_^